Wednesday, April 29, 2009

the beginning

I'm going to start a weekely collaborative poem. I will post a line or two or three and you comment on this post adding/deleting as you feel necessary. Seriously. Anybody and everybody. Go:

I would welcome your handshake
however xxxxxx he’s the money

congratulations for the recovery
cheers to you.doc was recently
undeleted

felicitations!

dot.

hats off!

dot.

well done!

dot.

3 comments:

Jeff said...

I would welcome your handshake
however xxxxxx he’s the money, over

medium congratulations for the
cheers to you.doc was rarely
a recovery

felicitations! took a lot of hats

off! dash

to the ice house dot.

A well done nibble

on the hook.dot

k said...

I would welcome your handshake
however xxxxxxx he’s the money, over

blown, constantly shorted, running dramatized
pitch,
hemmed high
xxxxxxxxxxxsmiling for what it’s worth

cool
as
shit
period

I’m frightened to ask why you ask why to
o (inquiry into the file)<--Your answer.

Drive?
xxxxxxx E
xxxxxxx no F
medium congratulations for the cheers to you.doc was rarely recoverable

but the main frame held.

“Felicitations,” as the four were taking all the hats off the men.
And women!

small things are small
dash
dash
.what?

A well done nibble
on the hook.dot

The Ice House is full of them.

steamboatjenkins said...

for what it’s worth
I would welcome your handshake
xxxxxxxxx
he’s not handing the money over
soon enough
soon
blown, constantly shorted to soon
running dramatized without
pitch, or meaning
to appear
hemmed too high
or over congratulated
while smiling

cool
as
shit
but Seriously
xxxxxxx your no Fun

I’m frightened to ask why
xxxxxxx aches and makes so many

(inquiries into the files)<--Your answer.
In small things that are ashed as smaller things

Well meant medium congratulations for the cheers for your doc was rarely recoverable

but the main frame held.

“Felicitations,” as the four were taking all the hats off the men.
And women! Four hats were taken

with
A well deserved nibble
on a hook.

The Ice House stil full of them.